Section Chief Sun Pingfan

On the evening of March 11, the business study of Zhejiang Liqun Law Firm was held as scheduled. We are honored to invite Sun Pingfan, Chief of the Grassroots Section of the Judicial Bureau of Luqiao District, to give a lecture in this study. Section Chief Sun explained "The key to writing a thesis lies in choosing a topic", and analyzed the elements of a legal thesis and the writing points of each part based on experience. A total of more than 30 lawyers participated in this study.

1. Common problems in current law papers

Problem summary

△The title of the article is too large, and the center is not prominent;

△The experience is not outstanding and the viewpoint is not clear;

△There are too many narratives, a lot of accumulated materials, and a lack of rational thinking;

△The structure is not rigorous and the hierarchy is not clear.

2. General steps in writing a legal thesis

△Choose topics carefully △Collect materials △Refine opinions △Draft papers △Edit articles

basic structure

△Pre-part: title, author, content summary (Chinese and English), keywords

△Main part: introduction, body, conclusion

△ Post part: appendices, references, dates, acknowledgments, etc.

Analysis

Title - the outline of the article

△ Accurate

△ concise

△ eye-catching

Principles of topic selection

1. Academic value 2. Urgent social needs 3. Act according to one's ability 4. The topic selection is innovative 5. Problem-aware

Executive summary - the epitome of the full text content

△The content is complete

△ Focused

△ short text

△Statement objective

Key words

△Words that have substantial meaning for expressing the central content of the paper

text

△ Common three-stage structure

Ask questions——Analyze problems——Solve problems

(Introduction) (Text) (Conclusion)

Notes and References

I don't read a paper with less than fifty annotations. ——Hu Jianmiao

List the importance of notes and references:

△ Can preliminarily judge the level of the paper and the background knowledge level of the author on related subjects;

△ It can preliminarily judge the moral level of the author. References are related to the credibility of the paper and the author's reputation.

article modification

△Is the center prominent?

△Is the structure reasonable?

△Whether the language is fluent

3. Summary

Topic selection is the key to writing a thesis

Materials are the basis for writing a thesis

Opinion is the soul of the essay

Text is the external expression of the thesis

classroom advice

Intensive reading of 30 original texts and 100 abstracts per year

The ancients said: "Words are without words, and action is not far away." In the highly competitive legal industry, writing is an important "weapon" for lawyers and the best display of lawyer talents. Therefore, lawyers should pay attention to eloquence training while Don't neglect the cultivation of writing skills, move your fingers and start writing!